save the date

so i spent my evening with a sketchbook, a pen, and calligraphy utensils and i just might have completed a save the date. there will be some tweaks here or there, but i think i like the concept; this one is quite rough (i sloppily cut it out and didn't even trim the thread) but i think i kind of like some of the roughness. i want it to come through that the wedding will be casual, intimate, homemade. critiques welcome.